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Liosi:
Mr. Miller, as the founder of LEEWS, one of the nation's best
law school exam-writing courses, we'd like to ask you a few
questions about bar exam writing vs. law school exam writing.
First, in general, is there a significant difference between
the two? If so, what are the differences? If not, what are
the similarities?
Miller: I tell my students that lawyers are nitpicky,
more nitpicky than law professors. I want them to learn to
be nitpicky, which will amuse their professors. So forgive
me, as a onetime practicing lawyer, if I nitpick as a preface
to your queries.
Frankly,
I never think of LEEWS as "one of the best." As
far as I'm concerned, and most of the well over 100,000 law
students I've instructed over the years, I suspect, and Planet
Law School, there's LEEWS, and then there's the same 'ol,
same 'ol IRAC-plus-helpful-hints that everyone else instructs,
that's been out there for decades and, while helpful given
the ignorance an entering law student brings to the problem
of law exam writing and preparation, has never assisted more
than handful write "A" exams.
Respecting
writing bar hypothetical-type essays versus law school, overall
they are similar exercises. There are fact patterns -- so-called
"hypotheticals," as they are made-up or imaginary
scenarios. The examinee is expected to know the law necessary
to resolve issues -- legal problems requiring resolution.
Then apply that law in an analytic process to predict a legal
outcome.
However,
there are important differences.
On the
bar, the examinee must draw from many legal areas of knowledge,
generally more than twenty -- corporations law, bankruptcy,
wills and estates, property, domestic relations, etc. On a
law school exam, of course, only the subject matter of the
single course will be tested.
Very,
very rarely, two chummy law professors who instruct the same
section of students in first year at a given school might
give a joint exam. Say torts/contracts. Then a student would
have to draw from at two areas of knowledge. But that is highly
unusual.
Bar exam
fact patterns often are pastiches of facts lifted from leading
cases that introduce recent developments in law somewhat unique
to the state. Law school hypos are more the product of a professor's
imagination, although often they have their basis in actual
events. Thus, we've had Lewinsky and Enron hypotheticals.
Liosi: Those must have been fun!
Miller: Hunh! I don't think law exams are fun for most
students, however savory the fact pattern. But the exams ARE
a game. And games can be fun, if you know the rules and have
the skills to play well.
Liosi: Interesting.
Miller: The only thing more problematic about a bar
exam essay is that you may be required to bring several areas
of legal knowledge to bear on a single, usually lengthy fact
pattern, versus just one on the entire law school exam.
For example,
on a bar exam you might have to draw from agency, property,
contracts, and possibly some other legal discipline while
addressing a single exercise. However, the separate legal
areas will typically be separated out in distinct numbered
questions at the end, and will appear in separate paragraphs
in the hypothetical. So really it's not that big a problem.
It's just different areas of legal knowledge tested separately
under the tent of one fact pattern.
Beyond
this there are several differences between bar and law school
essay exercises. In every aspect they redound to the benefit
of the examinee. The bar essay is a much more predictable
exercise.
First,
bar examiners are serious. No attempts at familiarity with
the examinee. None of the ha, ha character names in the hypos,
like "Imagine Miss Manners had occasion to tell Mr. Rude
..." You're not going to get quirky silly questions like,
"Imagine you're a giraffe who just learned tort law."
Bar examiners understand that passing the bar is serious business
and treat the examinee accordingly.
Liosi: Yes, I can remember many an
essay with funny names. Many a quirky instruction.
Miller: Not that taking a law school exam isn't also
serious business. But law professors often adopt a posture
of familiarity. Probably to mitigate the circumstance that
the exam is befuddling to their students.
A bar
exercise is never going to call for the so-called "policy
analysis" aspects that some few law professors want to
see. Far fewer professors, I may note, than the policy-oriented
tenor of so many law classrooms would suggest. The bar examiner
isn't interested in what the examinee thinks the law of California
should or could be.
The questions
that follow bar hypotheticals tend to be more straightforward
than the many variations that may spring from the mischievous
minds of law professors. You might get something open-ended
like "Discuss the legal issues raised in the foregoing
fact pattern." But law students are familiar with this
kind of question.
Generally
on the bar, you'll see a more pointed query like "Who
should prevail?," "How should the motion be decided?"
You won't get something cryptic and paralyzing like "Draft
a set of jury instructions to guide deliberations respecting
the foregoing facts." You won't even get something like
"Compare the holding in the case of X versus that in
case Y." You certainly won't get anything like the following
question posed by a professor at Duke in wills and estates
that constituted an entire two-hour exam -- "The words
'if not, then' in the context of the Rule Against Perpetuities.
... What do you have to say about that?" Pretty crazy.
Addressing it requires kind of a graduate level understanding
of LEEWS.
Liosi: I'd say! I wouldn't want to
tackle that one.
Miller: The bar exam is conclusion-oriented, but analysis
still must control, especially in California. Facts in essays
are straightforward. If you know the law of the state, particularly
recent decisions of the highest court, analysis should proceed
in a relatively straightforward manner to a right or wrong
answer. Bar examiners will typically test knowledge of important
developments in recent state cases, as they don't want someone
who prepared for the Arizona bar to be able to waltz in and
handle an exercise on the California bar.
This contrasts
with law school where professors want arguments on both sides
of issues, facts tend to be somewhat ambiguous, policy aspects
can enter in, and the outcome can go one way or the other
depending upon emphasis, much as two learned appeals courts
can reach contrary outcomes on the same law and facts.
Law students,
however, should know that although their professors typically
say, "There is no correct answer," they likely have
a preferred outcome in mind. Professors are unlikely to develop
a model response without coming to some conclusion, at least
a notion. They naturally think that their analysis is correct,
so their outcome or notion is favored.
Whether
on a law school or bar exam, much as a lawyer in a courtroom
is loathe to venture an emphatic position that might conflict
with the view of the judge he or she is before, unless absolutely
sure of her position, a bar or law school examinee should
avoid being emphatic as to the conclusion.
The lawyer
in a courtroom will tend to waffle. He'll say, "If it
please the court, ..." "May I humbly submit, ..."
So in stating a conclusion, law school or bar, the examinee
is best advised to waffle. She should preface the conclusion
with such lawyerlike preambles as, "It would seem, ..."
"On balance, ..." "In all probability, ..."
Nothing
is lost. You still have a conclusion. But in law school in
particular you mitigate any bias the professor may have respecting
the "correct" answer.
This having
been noted, invariably on a bar exam the examiner wants the
conclusion stated at the outset. The "C" of IRAC
moves to the top. The conclusion on a bar exam counts. It
gets a checkmark. It is indicative of whether the examinee's
analysis is on target.
Often
law professors want the conclusion stated at the outset, which
contradicts their insistence that "the conclusion is
unimportant." I think they just recall the format mandated
when they took the bar exam. It may have been the first time
they ever got formal instruction on how to present an exam
response. It certainly was for me.
However,
the conclusion should not be stated prior to completing analysis.
The examinee may have a conclusion in mind after mentally
thinking through the problem, but that conclusion should now
be set aside. The best thinking occurs while writing out the
analysis. Bar exams are still written, I believe, while the
majority of law exams are typed.
You should
always type if that is an option, as you can type much faster
than you write. However, many law students opt to write. I
think if you aren't sure what you're doing, you don't like
the clarity of typing.
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Having
completed the analysis, come back and plug in the conclusion,
which may have changed. Literally leave several spaces blank,
introduce the discussion, which is the analysis, then come
back and plug in the conclusion at the beginning.
On law
schools exams, unless expressly instructed otherwise, the
conclusion goes at the end, reflecting its unimportance.
If you
enter the conclusion at the end, not only are you unlikely
to prejudge the analysis, which in turn tends to lead to conclusory
statements, but you are less likely to overstate the conclusion
by interjecting aspects that are properly part of the analysis.
Indeed, you can now simply point the examiner to that aspect
of the analysis that you deem key or dispositive.
This is
another way to mitigate bias, should your conclusion differ
from what the examiner deems to be the correct answer. The
examiner thinks, "I disagree with your conclusion, but
I see you focused on the proper aspect of analysis."
Since there IS a correct answer on the bar, this is more important
in law school when the examiner wants the conclusion at the
outset.
Liosi:
Wow! You've surely given this a lot of thought. From my estimation
and based on my experience, you're right on target. I passed
the bar on my first attempt, some thanks to having attended
your program many years ago, you may recall. But this would
have helped. I'm surprised you don't do a bar exam version
of LEEWS.
Miller: I gained the initial insights that led to the
development of LEEWS while doing some bar tutoring for the
Bar Association of the City of New York. Minority law graduates
getting ready for the essay portion of the New York bar. And
I've retained some interest. From time to time law graduates
do LEEWS for the bar. Gives them a whole new perspective and
renewed confidence. But my focus has remained on law school,
particularly first year.
Liosi: Any thoughts on the low pass
rate on California's Attorney Examination, which was 28% the
last bar, and which features nothing but writing? If you think
the low pass-rate is motivated by market protection, due to
207,000 California attorneys, what, then, in the face of such
state bar motivation, can an attorney candidate do to improve
their bar-exam writing skills? Additionally, why do you think
an attorney's writing skills, all of whom presumably practiced
law for 5 years in another jurisdiction, are poor by California
bar exam standards?
Miller: I think market protection is definitely a likely
factor. I suspect California attorneys would also have a low
pass rate if required to take this exam. So the out-of-state
attorney's writing skills are not necessarily "poor"
by California standards. It's just that the bar -- excuse
the pun -- in terms of what is expected is probably set somewhat
higher than it is for the bar exam right out of law school,
and writing skills haven't improved by dint of being out in
practice.
I think
lawyers in practice have likely gotten better at analysis,
which isn't instructed very well in law school. Normally you
learn the nitpicky lawyer thinking only when you get out in
practice and go up against other lawyers who are thinking
very closely about the law and facts on the other side. You're
also challenged in your thinking by senior attorneys, if you
are fortunate enough to be in a firm, and also by judges.
But
how well you present on paper? ... There you would need the
criticism of an able senior attorney to make much progress.
I think
it is generally accepted that most lawyers don't write well.
They didn't learn it in law school. They don't learn it in
the hastily patched together briefs and other legal papers
lawyers submit in practice. Often lawyers merely fill in the
blanks in writings prepared by others that are kept on file.
Liosi: So how did you develop expertise in writing? Or were
you always good at it?
Miller: I was pretty good coming out of college in
the sense of being a "good writer," although I remember
my first exercise in freshman English at Yale being returned
to me with the notation in red at the top, "This is half
a paper!"
Whoa!
That was a shock to a seventeen year old who had been a top
student at Los Angeles High School.
Liosi: You're an Angeleno?!
Didn't know that.
Miller: Sort of. Came out from the east with my family
at age 13, then went back for college and stayed. But those
are formative years. Having been a UCLA fan in high school,
I rooted against the Trojans in the recent championship game.
If you grow up in LA, you're either a UCLA or USC fan.
Anyway,
I humbly submitted my half paper to one of my roommate's who
had gone to Choate. Elite prep school in Connecticut. He's
still a good friend, and he happily tore apart my paper. Then,
as a junior, I had the benefit of getting critiqued by Robert
Penn Warren, the well known and now deceased author. And by
senior year, I was writing a novel under the tutelage of none
other than the even more famous author, John Hersey, who was
a master of one of the Yale residential colleges.
Liosi: Wow! Heavy hitters. That sounds
wonderful. Did you finish the novel?
Miller: (Laughs.) No, never, ... and I won't. But I
have what I wrote. Strictly sophomoric effort.
Liosi: What was it about?
Miller: (Chuckles.) Never mind. Some things are best
left behind.
Liosi: Okay. So clearly you had a lot
of writing instruction and experience prior to going to law
school. Yale, also, if I'm not mistaken.
Miller: Yes, Yale again. Guess I didn't mind the lousy
weather in New Haven. But legal writing is different. It's
a myth that "good writers" do well in law school.
I think most important I had the benefit of over two years
writing appellate briefs in the appellate division of the
Brooklyn District attorney's office. That's where they stick
a Yale grad. Initially I received significant oversight and
did a lot of revising. My writing samples helped me make the
unusual jump from a local DA office to the higher echelon
US Attorney's office.
Liosi: Where was that?
Miller: Eastern district of New York, civil division.
Includes Brooklyn, Long Island, Queens, Staten Island, and
possibly Weschester County. It's been many years. Southern
district may have Westchester County, but mostly just Manhattan.
But let's
get back to your question. I think you wanted to know what
can be done to improve attorneys' writing.
Liosi: Exactly.
Miller: Well. I suppose whoever reads this isn't really
interested in my personal history. Although I'm always happy
to talk about myself.
Respecting
what can be done about attorneys' writing -- I don't think
a lot is necessary where this California bar exam is concerned.
The format I instruct for law students also applies to the
bar. It should also serve a practicing attorney.
Open with
a statement, a preamble of relevant law, just like you see
in judicial opinions, ... proceed to relevant analysis. Roughly
one paragraph per issue.
I think the thing I do different is I've developed this format
called "ugly but effective" that enables students
to greatly tighten up the loosely structured rambling that
characterizes most writing. It's pretty unique and effective.
I say it makes a good writer better, and a poor writer good
enough.
Liosi: I like that last sentence. While
your course is undoubtedly popular among law students, we
were wondering whether an attorney candidate can benefit from
your course. But I guess you've answered that.
Miller: There'd be a lot in my program not relevant
to an attorney. They wouldn't be interested in 2-4 line briefing
and how to take no more than a half page of notes per class
hour. Maybe two hours of irrelevant stuff. But how to break
down fact patterns to reveal relevant issues, how to present
analysis concisely. That would help. Presumably they would
pick up my instruction on analysis faster.
I've thought
of doing a program for attorneys. We would process actual
cases via the LEEWS method.
Liosi: Why haven't you?
Miller: Not ambitious enough, I guess.
Liosi: You mentioned 2-4 line case
briefing. That also sounds interesting. Kind of radical. Perhaps
a topic for another day. Actually, we ran that Miller article
a while back.
Miller: Cuts to the heart of what's wrong in law school
instruction. Requires skill at analysis, which most law students
never acquire.
Liosi: You can answer, "I'd rather
not answer," but do you have any thoughts about Stanford's
ex-law school Dean who failed to pass the last California
bar exam?
Miller: I'm never afraid to answer. I don't plan to
run for anything. Although I knew George Bush somewhat in
college. Met his dad, too. W was a year ahead of me. I was
certainly smarter and more capable than him then. And I was
surely more productive and competent in the years from college
to 40. So when it comes to running the Free World, ... But
maybe we shouldn't go there.
Liosi: Hm-m. Yes. But maybe another
time. But how about the Stanford dean? Any thoughts?
Miller: I don't know him, or her. Don't know anything
about him/her not passing the bar. Sounds embarrassing. Pretty
awful to have to subject oneself to a bar exam like a recent
law graduate after you've been the dean of Stanford's law
school.
I'm tempted
to say that goes to show that Stanford is overrated. (Laughs.)
But that would be unkind, right?
Let's
just say that passing a bar exam, although requiring reasonable
intelligence, mostly is about taking it seriously, having
reasonable skill at exam writing, and humbly putting in the
time and sweat to master a lot of black letter law that will
fly out of your head as soon as you finish the exam.
I'm sure
the good dean was smart enough, but perhaps not humble enough.
Probably didn't put in the requisite sweat and time preparing.
Bet he/she will pass the next time.
Liosi: One more question, a personal
one if you don't mind. Your first name is Wentworth. Pretty
unusual. There's an actor, Wentworth Miller, the lead in a
new series on FOX, Prison Break. He's up for a Golden Globe.
Also, I think he was in The Human Stain. Any relation?
Miller: So glad you asked! Always looking to slip that
little aspect in.
Wentworth Miller is my son. I'm Wentworth, Jr. He's the third.
My father, same name of course, passed away many years ago,
unfortunately.
I'm very
proud of "Went," as both he and I are normally known.
My entire family, and it's a big one, is very excited. We'll
be glued to the tube January 16th.
Of course
he isn't quite as handsome as the dad. (Chuckles.) But he's
very talented. I'm thinking I may be able to retire before
long if things continue to progress.
Anyone reading this, ... Be sure to catch Prison Break when
it returns on FOX in late March. Great show, if somewhat violent.
Liosi: Pretty cool, Mr.
Wentworth Miller. Pretty cool, indeed. I think our readers
will find this interview both edifying and interesting. One
of our journal's best!
To find out more about Mr.
Miller and his course, visit www.LEEWS.com.
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